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Friday, August 28, 2020

Writing about Nab the giraffe.

Nab is a giraffe he likes to eat leaves from his favourite apple tree and also sometimes eats the apples too he is funny and annoying sometimes and also nice a little bit 8'ft tall tallest in the land. he has black spots the longest but skinniest legs ever he likes cabbage he is a savage but then something happened...

It was just a normal day in the African bush Nab the giraffe was grazing (eating) of his favourite apple tree when a pack of lions came he didn’t want to get eat’n so he went up a dead tree and stayed there then the Nabs friend saw what's happening and came running to the lions then ran back to safety then the lions chased after him but they got lost and Nab ran back to safety.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Zia, this is Mrs Beckmann.
    I enjoyed your story of Nab the giraffe up a tree in the African bush. I could just imagine the lions chasing the giraffe around.
    Next time remember to put in full stops and capital letters to separate your sentences, (I almost ran out of breath reading the story as I did not know when to pause.)
    Have you ever seen a live giraffe?

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