There is a dreamlike forest and an attractive one. Moss growing on the dirt as soft as fresh carpet. Birds chipping fresh air untouched by humans but occupied by animals home of the animals. Protected by the king animal but none know whats the animal that's why its untouched by humans it's a wonderland. Fresh air it's nice there's even honey fresh honey the bears don't steal they buy it and if any body steals the bear is there to help fresh berries everywhere people say the best in the universe there's frogs loud frogs bees collecting pollen for their business
Friday, August 14, 2020
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Hello Zia its me Devon i really liked your writing and all the detail and that Every time that you put a full stop you then put a capital letter you don,t really need to do anything next time here is my blog cheek it out if you want click here to see my blog.
ReplyDeletehi Devon its me Zia thank you for your feedback maybe next time i will use CAPITAL LETTER maybe check my next blog post
Deletehi zia i like how you had all of these describing world maybe next time you can have more
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