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Monday, August 10, 2020

how to make a quality blog comment

Hello i'm Zia from wigram primary school i liked how you made a rap about sugar and to not eat it too much eat veggies and i also liked the beat it has a vibe also dancing and acting was cool you reminded me not too eat too much sugar and you could of not unnecessarily moved too much also  how did you make it sound like you had a microphone. 

here is there video i will link it link click here

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